some 3d animatic

I did some 3d animatic during the break.
It's not the final timing. There are some black area I'm still working on.
However, most of the camera moving and the timing of each shot are final.
tell me if anyone feels any un-fluid between shot and shot; or any camera angel is not works for you; or any suggestion to make composition better; or any idea of character movements?



Since lots of people doesn't get the story from my 2d animtic, I added more shots base on it......so my film is getting longer>"<

Mei Yu