My storyboard

Because I got stuck on my character design, I start to storyboarding my story. Haha... and my story became an action animation.(no gradfather anymore~)
Here are the timing of everything.
please, give me some commons~~
I don't like the storyboards from 1:47 to 1:53.(That's the sequence the boy cut down the last tree to cage the monster), I feel there should be one shot to show where is the boy, or what does he do exactly, or...I don't know


Mei Yu